Comments of chapter undefined of Young Justice: Ghost
Young Justice: Ghost
Arokey
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Thank you for the chapter!!!! :D I really liked this chapter- first of all the scene with Dinah and Oliver was really wholesome and fluffy and warm, and I'm glad they all finally talked about it. Plus, I think Oliver will kinda reach something close to a father figure, which would be positive. And Conner developing his powers further and Dante developing powerful, trustworthy people around him and not fighting a lone battle is great! I also like how he used his powers- I like this 'using everything you can' mindset more than being hesitant because of the ethical difficulty of invading another person's mind and essentially 'stealing' the skills they worked hard to get- because behaving morally righteous right now would really put his life in danger, so I'm glad he made a more rational decision. Plus it is REALLY cool, this kind of manipulation-just crafty and useful and discreet. I really like where this story is going!! Also, thank you for pushing down the voices of a couple of annoying idiots that say whatever sh#t they do. Keep doing that, ignore them.
Honestly, I don't know what the author wants me to think, he makes a very forced drama, saying that it was development and badmouthing the people who didn't like it, to then just ignore the drama that had two chapters ago, so it's hard not to think that Dante cried only because of forced "development" (Google Translator)
I didn't make a comment on the former chapter on how "brainless" was his action of destroying a mountain. Coincidentally the mountain was Mount Rushmore. Actually, I have the expectations that his action of destroying the mountain caused some collateral casualties that will wright on his consciousness.
As an amateur author, I have an idea of why you go with this approach to your story. But I feel like this story has droped in quality since the earlier chapters, and I feel can only go downwards from here. Maybe itâs just me, but either way I have lost all interest in this story. I wish only the best for your author, as to anyone else reading this comment
I have one more word aside from this(Great job), but I need to not have Superboy die, it would be very nice if he lived and was a proper character. Also, Artemis has been removed from this, because you don't know how to add her properly right? I have an idea and you should either do Artemis x Robin or simply have her literally be Moon God Artemis.(An Amazon, that hides any feelings she had or has for any man and lives as such, makes for a cool character)
