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Comments of chapter undefined of Young Justice: Ghost

drake2378
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honestly like the way you write relashinships. at least its better then the majority on here that think mass harems are the way to go and significant others are things to be won. in my opinion those stories are not enjoyable as to me harems have a massive problem there will always be a favorite and least favorite and that is not fair to anyone. also if they have kids chances are the dad would care about his favorites kids more then his least favorites which is just awful. while even the best parents have a favorite even if they don't want too and feel guilt about it and will never say it this just magnifies the problem

0dinson
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Not a fan of how he weirdly turned all crybaby and woe is me. Idk maybe just me but this chapter was meh.

Zaitro
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I am not so much into that of breaking into a "anxiety" for some sort of character development. I mean, anything could even cause it. Some of them are just... Less serious than others, for not use other "term." The only thing that I could relate the ranting of the MC on this chapter is that he seems that there is no hope. It is actually pointless for me. A city could just be destroyed tomorrow if one of the presidents or people in charge of the Nukes goes "mad" and start spamming Nukes on some places. In this case, the Nukes are the "Lords of Order and Chaos." Totally unstoppable. I actually I wonder now if someone is suffering from "anxiety" breaks thinking about Nukes on their heads one day.

Ahmed_Maged
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I dont like how he suddenly starting being a coward

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

Awesome chapter! I wonder if next chapter we will see Zatara catching his daughter kissing Dante...That would be...fun.

Leylin_Farlier99
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I agree with all other here, this chapter was mid and tbh, this fic is losing its charm now, like your other fics are much better than this one man.

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jahmii
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some of these readers really need to go outside and get mental help

LeProphet
LeProphetLv14LeProphet

i kinda feel him he has the attention of the big fishes of law and chaos i wonder if that means the green, and other powers to be will do anything and since this new power it means others will connect to it? kinda like the speed force so there is gonna be future telepaths born

Gerier
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nono_daxcd_9505
nono_daxcd_9505Lv4nono_daxcd_9505

What I would do is ask a favor that they fear I wouldn't mind owing you something

DarkSlayer
DarkSlayerLv14DarkSlayer

Great chapter as always

MagicSand
MagicSandLv6MagicSand

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Benjamin_Holmes
Benjamin_HolmesLv14Benjamin_Holmes

you did a good job at making this chapter emotional

Some_Guy_3
Some_Guy_3Lv4Some_Guy_3

Thanks for the chapter, it was really good

klostrez
klostrezLv14klostrez

thanks for the chapter

Daoist943346
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TFTC

John_Wolfie
John_WolfieLv1John_Wolfie

Yes! That's EXACTLY how anyone would react in that situation! I LOVE IT!

I_dont_believe_it
I_dont_believe_itLv14I_dont_believe_it

What world does your travel fic start in?

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

Drop drama

Misifus_7w7
Misifus_7w7Lv3Misifus_7w7

Tell your amuque to update, she has been several days without uploading anything, I'm thinking of leaving her and remove my heart, thinking that she fell silent, but seeing this, I hope she continues uploading chapters. I also love your story, although this chapter was weird, but I look forward to more chapters of this fascinating story.