Bukaro
I honestly believe that what you write is everything obscene and obscene that most of us have thought of doing, but would never do it. More than one of your readers has had ideas like the ones you propose, let's face it, many of us have ever thought about what we would do if we could stop time or things like that And in most cases, not very morally acceptable ideas always come up, more than one will think of stealing, taking revenge on someone, and worse things. That is why I think that what you write is morally bad but to an acceptable extent, because everything the protagonist has done has not reached the point of being horrible. Manipulator, ok we all do to some extent, Kill, but most of the murdered are garbage, For these reasons I like this story, and I hope it continues to the end, ..... Now that I wrote all this I realized that it is a lot of text..
Esta es una muy buena historia, que cuenta tanto con trama como evolución del MC y su harem ya que no son solo relleno como suele pasar, y Luis aun no paso la linea de lo horrible moralmente como comenzar un exterminio de inocentes sin sentido o abusar y maltratar de mujeres, así tu escritura es perfecta como esta ya tiene un gran equilibrio entre el en antihéroe y el mal