Comments of chapter undefined of Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
EnderPL
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-.- picking up a little girl? Let me guess she will call him big brother? Or maybe you would like to skip ahead to Onii chan? Why does everyone bring the Chinese novel cliché and Japanese anime bs into western novels?? They don't mix well together please keep that sh.it out
Wouldn't surprise me. There's a fanfic where the guy has Rinigan. Another is a god damn s.ex dragon. One who is literally a god. Even human ones build a canal through westeros which is 400 km wide lol. I have read so many garbage ff, that everytime i read a new one i wait for it to go downhill into idiotism. And storyline like this where mc picks up an orphan girl ALWAYS end up bad. Well i guess we'll see what you do with it
EnderPL:Bro! Chill! I didn’t even say anything yet and you already wrote the ending. How the **** do you even imagine oni chan in Westeros? What next? The mc will run with sharingan and shout kagebumshin jutsu? Plllllleeeeaaassseeeimage
My dude he is legit 7 I’m pretty sure even if he was a genius no one will let him to battle of take him seriously no matter what I like what you are doing just sometimes it makes me cringe when a 7 year old flirts I mean try and make him 7 and smart but don’t give him hormones he could not possibly have a child brain is not made like that I mean look at child geniuses and base him of that don’t make him so unbelievable unless you are going the comedy root ( this is constructive criticism ,so pls don’t be mad just try and make it better and not so cringe by doing what is impossible like there is no way a bunch of adults would just so easily agree to a child like that I mean would you agree to do what a child of your rich boss tells you even if he was a genius and he is like I want to go and beat up criminals with some security guard ,like no one will accepts that no one especially not a protective mother, he should have stayed home like a good little child and send help and relief to everyone else and another thing it is physically impossible for a 7 even if trained to take down an ***** like at all unless they have a super soldier serum lying around then I’m saying it is I,possible just try and make it more believable so peps can watch and not cringe and the impossibility of a 7 making a grown women blush beating a man who is twice his size and not make me forget having all the grown ups just follow everything he says like the have no mind or ideas of there own
