Comments of chapter undefined of Big Shot's Reincarnation Sweeps the World

Big Shot's Reincarnation Sweeps the World

Nalan Cloud

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Bre317Lv12Bre317

so, not too far into the story yet, but the writing is fair and no big issues. however, I would like to say that (at this point) I feel absolutely no connection to the female lead at all. I realize this is just scratching the surface of the story so far, but can't say I'm at all eager to continue. there are too many story lines like this so that if you don't grab your reader right away you will never get another chance. just my own opinion tho!

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khg7112Lv5khg7112

why is she so cold to all

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K_GandhiLv5K_Gandhi

who evoked such a response

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HGGLv5HGG

who sent the piano then

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Khg711Lv5Khg711

too many loose ends still

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Khg07Lv5Khg07

spice recipe so valuable 😋😋

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KHGLv5KHG

hmmn who called so late

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runman7012Lv15runman7012

Whoever that is calling, I don’t think you want to mess with mom. After dealing with the nonsense at the school she will probably cuss you out lol

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MeanesxLv4Meanesx

👍

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DrakkuriLv15Drakkuri

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Met2Lv6Met2

So many admirer??

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Daoist207304Lv15Daoist207304

Who’s called her mom

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ReaderMicLv15ReaderMic

Mysteries deepen

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lilpriestessLv14lilpriestess

When the story starts of in the middle.... and nothing makes sense... omg lol

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