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Thanks for the story! __MD is one of the few stories that I have really followed from the start all the way to the end, and I really enjoyed it. __I really liked all the interactions between the characters and the main trio especially, even when they acted in frustrating but believable ways. By extension, the one thing I didn't really like i think is having Kaori being absent for so long, and then losing her memories of her time unconscious. __Seeing all the characters - and especially Ash - grow throughout the books was great, and it's sad that we won't see them anymore. __If there's one character I disliked, I'd say it's Keiko's grandmother. I feel like she was maybe a bit too one-dimensional, but there aren't any others that really come to mind. __Overall, thank you for the amazing story, and I'll definitely be checking out your next story (and trying to catch up with AA)... Though I probably won't do the same comment every chapter as for this one.
Thanks for the chapter author. So, we are finally here at the very end of the novel. This is actually only the second or third real novel on this site that I've actually finished. Though it’s sad that this journey has finally officially ended, but it ended on a good note. I’m sure that endings are very hard to write since you want to please the readers and write a satisfying ending that everyone can accept. It's that time again (like the 5th or something) that I must reiterate, if I didn't randomly stay up till 3 in the morning on a school night and never found this novel than I would have never known the amazing story that you've told over the past 2 years (I think). Through the journey of reading this novel, I keep thinking and I know, that if I found this novel today or earlier at 50+ locked chapters, I would've just added it to my yuri collection and never would have read it for fear of not being able to catch up since I rely on fast passes. I'm also glad that I never fell too far behind because when that happens, I lose hope of catching back up to the latest chapters and then I never do, and I lose motivation to read it. An example of this happening was with Nanomancer Reborn. I claimed to be one of it’s original readers back then (and my presence if all over the comments of that novel lol) and followed it up to chapter 1000 and then slowly fell behind. Reili is a godly author for being able to consistently release daily chapters for like 3 or 4 years straight. If I had money, then I would definitely support you because you definitely deserve it and you've been one of my favourite authors this past year. Back to the novel. This novel greatly satiated my hunger for a good yuri novel because in my experience I have trouble finding them and being able to enjoy them (because they have 400+ locked chapters lol). So, I'm very glad that on that fate changing night, I binge read all current 30 or 50 chapters or something of the first volume of Moonlight Demon and I stuck with the novel till it’s conclusion. I can't really tell what my favourite scene was or who my favourite characters are. Every character in this story was amazingly well written. I love the original trio and the new family members they gained along the way and Metsumi for being the world's best mum. (Your spicy and steamy scenes were also well written but that's beside the point haha.) I'm not sure what else to say other than that I'll definitely be here for your next story and your future stories if you continue writing. That's how much I respect and love your writing. To tell you the truth, I probably won't read your other current stories but like I said, I will be here for the foreseeable future. I'm also looking forward to those after stories I mentioned as well as those alternative endings. Unless you want to immediately start your next novel and leave those for a later date. And that's all I can think of saying author. I’ve probably missed something I wanted to say but anyways I'll be ending this long essay here, so I hope you have a wonderful day (or night)!
Thanks for the book! I can't really say which is my favorite scene. Might be how Ash picked up Luvine and integrated her in the family. It definitely showed Ash' conflict about the past and set a path for the future, a turning point in her behavior, openly showing compassion. Something she wished for her past self and showing what it's like to have her own attached kid for the future.
Thank you for such a wonderful book! You should think about publishing it someday, assuming you already aren't. Aside from AA, this is my favorite book on this site. I really liked how relatable the struggles of the characters were, it made reading this more suspenseful. Can't wait to see what you write next ❤️
