Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars The Timelord

jup it is because i let myself have time to develope the mc and let him grow. I showcased that the mc even when beeing older than the body that is hosting him can't flee from its influence. That means yeah the story will be slow as heck that is the point because you see the mc has right now no personality witch would go well with woman or beeing a great leader but a change like that has to have a background because just his disires of his older mind won't be enouth for it. If you don't like it i can't rly help you.