Comments of chapter undefined of Vanishing Embers

I was not too attached to Vega, and she could have definitely benefited from a deeper dive into her history. It also feels that you dumbed-down Aisha by making her consume the artificial soul in the middle of combat for no reason. This played in making Vega's death feel, bluntly, stupid and inconsequential, in an attempt to force out some development in the characters around her. You did well in the fight scene, but, as said above, making Aisha eat the soul in the middle of a fight is incredibly stupid. You should not do anything like that again in the future, as it conflicts with Aisha's cautious nature, making her character inconsistent and the story feel unnatural. Of course, if it is something like a desperate situation where she has to consume something without knowing the potential drawbacks, then you can disregard what I said before, but this was not one of such cases. Anyway, thank you for the chapter!