Comments of chapter undefined of one time sign in system in Harry Potter

How about cucking James by adding Lily to the harem

let James die and lily in coma till the mc saves her and add her in his harem latter, while female version of Harry is at dursleys to be saved by mc

Pls no potter bashing and no haughty harry as it would also mean sirius would b an arse and sirius is meant to b a legend

honestly a bit of Weasley bashing (except Fred and George because although they are pranksters they know what to do and have some common sense) and Dumbledork bashing is good, but this doesn't seem like a dark llord Dumbledore fic, misguided mabey, evil no, and Harry should be with the Dursleys, just eaiser and flows better that way

isn't usually harry thought to be a squib and his brother is BWL? or you can make the 'squib' a girl or something?

make harry the wbwl and dumbledore the grandpa who lived!

yo pls let Harry be an orphan we get many points to face slap Dumbledore

Brainwash the chosen one, make him kill his own family(potter) if you can,

ugh cocky harry is the worst.Its like epitome of fame plus blood.

my only comment is..... I'm awesome 😎

don't do it

cool idea

Well james became a better person because of lily so if he had lost her in some way he could easily go back to his old ways and with dombledore manipulation raise harry to become a bigger jerk then he was

yep that plans good

no need for dursley

Is the person your talking about me Mr. Author?? Im innocent

Rose potter

There could be no horcrux Harry perhaps?

Sound like a cool idea