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Comments of chapter undefined of Gods Art - The Legendary Combat Summoner

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Giovane_Martins
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author, you are not putting them in dialogue at the time of sex, you put the scene and such but the most important thing is the words of fuck me, stronger, or faster, and more words to spice up the scene, your scenes of r18 is warm

iseeyfn
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Roger that will take that into consideration...funny how it was something i am trying to avoid actually...afraid of getting her too aggressive for the readers liking. I think because of the culture setting. There were feedback about xin ru being too slutty from the first nsfw =x as such it did affect me mentally when i write about her. Also because of her being his first woman in the harem. I can see this role for 2 person in his possible future harem...one of which is already introduce in the story Liu Yu Han since it would fit her straightforward personality but currently i am half decided on adding her into the harem. The other someone not introduced yet so far. Thanks for the feedback! For the latest chapter, I kept your words in mind and now am more clear on what you feel is lacking. I can definitely do it for one of the girls in the future (well at least this is base on my experience. Asian girls who are more vocal is a bit not that common but than again the younger generations may be different =p half decided on who the next NSFW scene will be with but if it is Liu Yu Han i will definitely try what you mentioned.

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Draken_Phenix
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moooooooorrree