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Comments of chapter undefined of Gods Art - The Legendary Combat Summoner

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Giovane_Martins
Giovane_MartinsLv12Giovane_Martins

your sex scene is very weak

iseeyfn
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ya i agree could be better. in fact the story has been affected quite a little ever since i had to juggle job and parenting full time since my spouse is stuck overseas. Pretty hard when you start writing n your kids keep interfering which is why i try to squeeze in as much as could when they are asleep and nothing is on hand which is rare...like today. At times i just type till 2am and almost fall asleep lol ok back to writing first will take note of the feedback and see how to better it.

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Draken_Phenix
Draken_PhenixLv14Draken_Phenix

mooooooooorrre

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Paladium
PaladiumLv6Paladium

Thx

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Devilngle
DevilngleLv3Devilngle

first!!