iseeyfn
ya i agree could be better. in fact the story has been affected quite a little ever since i had to juggle job and parenting full time since my spouse is stuck overseas. Pretty hard when you start writing n your kids keep interfering which is why i try to squeeze in as much as could when they are asleep and nothing is on hand which is rare...like today. At times i just type till 2am and almost fall asleep lol ok back to writing first will take note of the feedback and see how to better it.