Comments of chapter undefined of Mori in One Piece

hmmm......... sect harem

hey you have potential, i believe it would be better to do chapters with 2k words, and also look for an editor. The story is good and has a future, develop the characters ❤️👍

a lot of grammar mistake but good enough the story is promising just not thr=e grammar

Nami and her sister, robin, hancock, stoomie, adivda (when she eat the devil become slim), rebecca, that mermaid princess, i feel like missing some

It a bit confusing to read but has potential

Where are you?

good story.. only that Mori is really .. really lazy .. ... ... very lazy...

Thanks for the chapter

bro use grammarly will help you...