alienfrommars
WTH wasn't expecting that???
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You did good. You're a good writer 😊👍👍👍
Yh it's very good
well...im loving this story so far 😍
You did well! Not weird, and still a good read.
i feel okay reading this chapter. nothing weird.
Nope thought it was good
I’d say it was even better written in third person. ❤️ You did awesome.
It wasnt weird at all. Cool!
I still dig it 🙌
Awesome! 🥰😍🥰 So the Duke is finally awake... and went missing too! aahh... yes, yes! He went to secure his "reserved meal". Hehehe... 😂😂😂
very nice story!!! I love it
very good story so far! 😍
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Very good, still enjoying very much.
Hooked!
Work in progress
story is good👍🌹
Duke remembers me of 'Raizel' from Noblesse...LOL