Comments of chapter undefined of I became a god and now I'm ruling over the universe

Chille, instead of using caps for system dialogue, you should use [ dialogue ] Because reading the caps makes me imagine the system voice screaming at me. But when i see the reaction of the mc, i know it's not. Also, the name se Yun should be used as Se Yun. Because the front name se without caps in front is kind of weird. You should also pay attention to spaces between each sentence after each dot and coma. Good luck in writtig :)