Comments of chapter undefined of Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Great so far. Hope the mc sister has also magic.

I think mc sister should have magic when she young want to see the bundle of joy make the novel more fun to read. as for mc i feel like mc family name should be an ancient house which was assumed to be extinct this could make mc more powerful in magic and in politics.

thanks for the ch waiting for more

I hope MC won’t be a part of the “golden trio”, it’s so overused already… Harry and Ron aren’t very impressive in the original storyline… it would be better if he had his own “adventures” and didn’t care about the “main cast”. Well this kind of story would be harder to write, so it is very rare for fanfic authors to do something like that… and they only repeat the canon with little changes because of the presence of the OC. I remember only one story (+sequel) about an OC character who didn’t take part in canon storyline and had his own in the background (full of darkness) of unchanged plot. Probably most original idea for the HP fanfic i have read, only that unfortunately while idea was brilliant, execution was only so so…

great chapter👍🏻. Hope we'll see his wand in the next chapter 😁.

More xD,

pat-reon name?

thanks fir chapter author

The story is going great.. ✌✌👑 Waiting for next chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter

Good Job

thanks for the chapter

Too bad the age difference is too large, so ethan and cele wont be going to hogwarts together. Kinda a missed opportunity, though it seems deliberate

Great novel, keep up the good works.

Very glad he left the owl with the family

Can you stop writing a whole chapter for buying anything are you going to write 300 chapters about buying casual item .its like reading a story meant for 10 year old kid .he is a reincarnated person so he is only child in body you make him look like an a 5 year old child

How does he know abt acromantula?

Great Chapter! I'm in love with little Nyx. Great fic so far. Keep up the great work.