Comments of chapter undefined of Simi realistic reincarnation into Naruto

Simi realistic reincarnation into Naruto

Kyle80888

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Apurba_SharmaLv14Apurba_Sharma

yeah story is decent. I don't hate it. But, I feel like a lack of emotion. When I read novel, I unconsciously image the story in my brain. MC in this novel is just blandly explaining what he is doing. There's places where emotion is coming out, So, I think if you keep writing, eventually you will automatically get it without any conscious effort.

3yr

Kyle80888AuthorKyle80888

Yeah I agree. This is my first time writing a fleshed out story, so I am new to a lot of things. I usually write Non-fiction type writing, so fiction is kinda new to me. Plus I’m in highschool so i havent learnt all the necessary tools to be a great writer.

3yr

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QuillinLv6Quillin

haters goin to hate, ignore and push on. just saying they can stop reading if they don't like it

3yr

AkisuLv13Akisu

Thanks for the chapter. Now what are you on about? I don't see anything wrong about the plot, sure i don't know your thought process but from a readers point of view so far it's been fine. If you feel there's something wrong with it then learn from it and avoid doing it in the future also only way to learn is to try. Hope to see more chapters soon.

3yr

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O_DanielLv2O_Daniel

Just started reading about 2 days ago and from my own point of view, this story's really good... And I like the fact that u don't waste too much time on any detail u just go straight to the point and get on with it... That way I don't get bored... ☺️☺️😌😌 Nice work...

1yr

TheUltimateP1eLv4TheUltimateP1e

idk what you mean i fkng loved it till now! Fights good, grammer good, story good. Me like! Ez a 4/5

1yr

CerisuLv1Cerisu

Thx

3yr

stinkclawLv14stinkclaw

you don't need to have a plan up front it is naruto and the mc is growing up from scratch. he can just figure it out as he goes along while enjoying the setting.

3yr