Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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Wilder_96Lv12Wilder_96

Great chapter, the only thing that bothered me was the “cant hold them argument.” No offense intended but it kinda felt like you took the easy way out to not weaken the death eaters too much... I love the James and Sirius moments, theyre so good at playing off eachother, it makes for witty and fun dialogue. Also loved Quin’s moment of reflection/triumph at the end there. His actions have absolutely saved many lives... Only question is what kind of butterflies with this cause. Anyways thanks for the chapter! Love this story!

1yr

Mi14142Lv1Mi14142

Quinn is going to sacrifice herself? I hope this doesn't happen, and God forbid Daphne or Ivy die, please don't let that happen.

1yr

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paras_raiLv3paras_rai

I want to see quin fail

1yr

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MarcolzanLv15Marcolzan

wait... the Fire Nation wouldn't have air ships at this time would they? they ibly get airships after Aang wakes up... meh, rule of cool.

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Arrow_569Lv4Arrow_569

ohh mannnn quinn have easily destroyed power balance ..... sure now the faction are balance and even we have voldy and dumble at best health ... but add quinn to light faction and here we have.. . have light faction winning with a breeze ... we need a clever villain or a clever plan.

1yr