Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

I think I'm representing the Daphne faction by saying they're underrepresented. I would like the author to hear our claims, 1- Daphne must have more or as much screen time as Ivy 2- Quinn needs to respect Daphne a little more and deepen his relationship with her 3- Ivy must not have a higher role than Daphne. According to the Wuxia code, the first woman is the most important woman. Ivy is only a second wife or even a concubine she must not exceed Daphne 4- last claim, we want more chapters

What about the poor Daphne 🥺

Poor Daphne, just constantly left on the wayside and screwed over…

I personally do not dislike the idea of Quinn being in a relationship with both Ivy and Daphne. The thing is that the relationship is quite unbalanced, it seems that Quinn is cheating on Daphne instead of him loving both Daphne and Ivy.

I don't remember, but if by any chance quinn couldn't cast spells in his Animagus form

Daphne is way to mistreated when she is supposed to be the main partner. Oh well, its not like the author would ever bother to read the comments

This is the straw that draws the camel's back for me author sorry.. I appreciate this novel with fascination on Quinn's love for magic his grey area thinking.. his bravado , his love for his family.. I love Daphne as a character a silent supporter that many irl don't appreciate because they don't hog the spotlight. So I am very glad when they started their relationship.. I like the sin arc as this is the best and fastest way for a character to grow up . But what happened after he doesn't grow up, just a little bit power up and retain some greediness. I accept that that greed led to the situation of ivyxquinxdaphne.. what character is quinnn. Smart kind rich thoughtful some kind of control freak and loving.. but all I see here this Quinn is greedy vindicative ... How is he kind if he did this to Daphne.. how is he loving if he know that what happened with them with ivy hurts Daphne and it's still fresh and they have said that no more secrets.. and here they are just like another vault scene leaving Daphne blind.. is he loving or plain greedy he wants the excitement to ivy but still want Daphne.. but don't do anything to prove to Daphne that choosing him is a good choice.... Seeesh it's a long comment but this is the last chapter I will read sorry author.. maybe when I recover from this heartache that the quinn and the best hp fanfic is ruined... I will read but I think it is close to none.. thanks again author fighting.. I hope that not the same with Quinn. You will grow as an author cause you where great on those time...

well, there goes the superhero to the rescue, seriously can't he just stay inside taking care of her? So it's kind of obvious that he's going to get involved as a masked vigilante.

Ohh man, i don't like this, poor Daphne

thanks, I loved it!

Hmmm, It's rare for me to be so disapointed in a three way relationship, I have never liked it, but I had never seen anyone do it as bad as it is done in this novel. Ivy is obviously favored here, and Daphne doesn't even have that much screen time, if the moment with her and MC by some miracke appears , it's short and bland as if author wants to get this over with and make her irrevelant again. I prever Daphne and was happy with romance until Ivy, but If Author wants MC to be with Ivy so much, then he should just make Mc break up with Daphne in some way, because it just hurts me to see her being treated like this and I don't she deserve it, after she very relucantly accepted him being in a relationship with other women, after he cheated on her.

Thks for the chapter

thanks

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for chapter

Thank you author-sama for the chapter

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