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Another girlfriend another 100 filler chapters. This story lacks motivation or a long term goal that is leading towards something. There is nothing at the moment that is keeping me here or looking towards something. While i am glad that he is slowly opening up and telling others the things he does, it just feels all so unnecessary. I hope we get some answers towards all these vaults. Do not just finish this arc after he cleanses his soul and get some upgrades. There should be some explanation on why those vaults are the way they are and who made them. This could potentially create a much more interesting world background, hinting at the existence of other very powerful wizards(not just dumble, grindel, flamel etc) who are good at soul magic(sins), ice, water and so on. They could still exist or have created their own schools or factions in the world. His occlumency teacher is the best example. Interesting character and also a goal to surpass him in this magic.
Translated author.... I think it would be better that at the end of the situation of the sins Quinn tells Daphne and Ivy about his strange behavior to them and how he got to that situation... (so they conclude that the sins they originate from him that means he feels something for them and with that you form a way for the relationship between them to develop more) so you also clarify things with Daphne and the mc tells her about the cursed vaults since Ivy has an idea overview of what they are
Direspectful and disappointing but still thank you You should have TAG it if you wanted to make a harem story, you putted a romance tag not a harem tag. Seriously this is just so disrespectful to your reader to do this so late in the novel and make us waste so much time. This was a great story that absolutely didnât need this. If you had disclaimed it in the description or in the tag no one would have ever complained, even if I really despise harem to itâs core value even i must say it was written and bringed way better than others trash harem novel. In the End thank you for everything Author, it was and still is a good novel
Well at least the Sin arc is about to run its course. I honestly didn't mind the inclusion of the harem tag but Ivy really could have done with so much more relationship development first. It kinda felt like ginny from the original, just in the background, periphally involved in some escapades but nothing substantial. The Sins were.... Interesting and certainly a relatively unique element to the HP world/plot. Definitely overstayed its welcome though. No real threat to the overall development too. Bit boring since it never really showcased Quinn's intelligence in solving the issue. Still, all in all this is one of the more superior FF and I'm a little sad the ending is planned for the cannon ending timeline. Hopefully we get more than a handful of epilogues.