Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

...I will keep scrolling these chapters down until he return to normal.

Soooo a sin per chapter? i think i can stomach that altough i would hate for the sin to mess up quinns relationships and plans

For me, it's pointless and plotless chapters of sin arc ... doing introspection and then doing nothing to move actual change in plot ... Why change the nature of MC this drastically, it was humble and good, and now it's just useless observer for actual plot ??? burden of emotions (sin-arc) is so much that its hampering the actual story line of hp-fanfic ...

Wrath is coming out to play..

I think wrath will have something to say about this invasion

And here we go!

Enjoyable as usual

Ami no me molesta...es algo que esperaba cuando la prueba era basada en los siete pecados..sigue con tu obra sin molestarte por los comentarios..estas creando una gran novela y eso no te lo puede quitar nadie...y menos la gente que ni se acercaria a los pies de esta obra si escribieran

Is it wrath? Is it??

so , wrath?

The chances of luct quinn doing something with ivy or daphne is high. I think if WN is gonna delete this if i write luct correctly

I thank you for the chapter.

thx

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍👍