Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Eddie has a good chance of becoming a professional Quidditch player, even more so after the games were broadcast on the radio to bars and restaurants and everyone could follow the Hogwarts games including Tracey's parents... Thanks for the chapter!

very good progress in this chapter though with both quinn's relationship with daphne and eddie's relationship with tracey

I loved Eddie's development!!!! Him going pro totally fits!! This chapter was lovely overall. Thanks for the chapter!!!

Man, Eddie is basically the cliche protagonist of a fsk 6-12 movie...

Where's Ivy in all of this? Don't think she'll give up so easily.

Quinn and Cedric

I feel sad for the Weasley Twins and Gryffindor Vixens, bud Kudos to Eddie and Roger.

WOOOOOOOO!!!! GO EDDIE!! THAT'S MY BOY!!!!!

We are all so proud of our great eddie! I am so proud! Thanks for the chapter!

Quinn x Daphne

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Will bro become an official commentator after retiring?

No me gusta Daphne para Quinn, no puedo esperar a que terminen con esta farsa por dios, no son compatibles y su relación se siente tan forzada para crear drama, me alegro de que no aparezcan mucho durante los capítulos y se centre mas en demás cosas mas importantes que su romance falso ahre

God.. i feel like this raised so many red flags.. he’s going to die isn’t he..?

I thank you

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter