Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Oh c'mom Quinn! Don't be a dense harem protagonist! Just kiss the girl!

I miss the kiss with Daphne

I though the story was going to do something exciting outside the canon, but the thing that should be outside canon is really boring and following canon is boringx2 i just speed read every 2 o 3 paragraphs just to finish it fast and go to read other things. I really liked it in the first chapters, it follow and expanded the story but now is not interesting anymore, he is doing everything just a lot more "grand" everything seem unimportant.

Quinn problably wouldnt be the hostage, even if that would be funny ( he could just free himself, at least i think )... the hostage will be Fleur's sister with him being the commentator as usual

Unpopular opinion here but I still don't like Daphne..... I mean none of the girls feels like they can accompany him in his magical journeys. Thanks for the chapter.

Quinn

Great chapter, I thought quinn in the bath was pretty funny, definitely got a good laugh from it. I always love to read the new chapters, they are a highlight of my day that I always look forward to! I hope you continue to write and enjoy the process of doing so.

I all for the OC Ivy honestly, seems more flexible in story development to me.

It's a hollow feeling...

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Thanks for the Chapter! It was interesting this chapter and this is the first time that Quinn notice a specific detail about Dalphne so that’s good. Team Dalphene!✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻✊🏻. Anyway Good Work!👍👍👍👍👍.

this is starting becoming like a Japanese novel where MC's like each other but don't do nothing a boring status quo, i still believe on ivyXquinnXdaphene ship, don't let poor ivy outside

it sucks how the author didnt show what bathing suit ivy wore.

Hostage quinn pleeeeaase

ATTENTION DAPHXQUIN SECT! I AM LOOKING FOR SUGGESTIONS FOR A PROPER TITLES FOR DAPHNE AND QUINN! WE NEED ONE FOR EACH AND ONE FOR THEM TOGETHER (3 in total)! PLEASE COMMENT YOUR SUGGESTIONS BELOW IF YOU SO PLEASE! I'll try to go off likes depending on how many responses there are, and hopefully get a clear winner to announce and start using next chapter. Thanks guys! THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER AUTHOR-SAN (BOW TO THE WILL OF THE SECT!)!

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story please keep it up and stay healthy

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Thanks for the chapter

I don't know how to feel. I expected a better scene between Quinn and Daphne but now we know who is the love interest.

ship sailed!!