Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

I'm pretty sure I already know what's gonna happen in order of the phoenix. Umbridge is gonna ban the operation of A.I.D. and Quinn is gonna mess her up bad😂.

Good chapter im loving the growth of Luna that assertiveness and confidence is a sight to see. This tourney is a great way to showcase other students that I would normally not be that invested in kudos to you.

Your pacing of this arc is kinda messy. Flexing arcs if i described it

Jojojo omoshiroi

Jumping back and forth between two different scenarios is not good if it's not a mass release. It complicates things for readers like me.

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

what i am really curious about... is if the games will be interesting XD

Will his parents ever be mentioned it seems they hAvent really been tOuched Upon? UnLess im firgetting a chapter if sO my b

good chapter

Fantastic chapter! Can’t wait to read more!

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Minerva McGonagoll - Quidditch nut - Omoshiroi

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍😎

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thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter😀

Thanks ✌️

thanks for the chapter