Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

You're back. I hope you get great score for your exam. Thanks for the chapter. Anyway, Quinn is way more Slitherin than any other character so far. He is truly the mastermind of this AU. On side note, I wonder what will happen if Quinn join UFC or WWE. I think it's gonna be fun to watch.

This raises a question.... where is Greengrass and Tracy, the slytherin duo just disappeared and are not even mentioned anymore. Ps thanks for the chapter

That was Awesome! Character development for Draco! We need more chapters like this where sub-cast get some the limelight and not just the main cast! Maybe do some chapters from the perspectives of the professors, not just Lily, but maybe a segment for each of them but separated from each tournament event. Flitwit and Pomfry for the dragon event, maybe McGonagall for the ball dance or the water event (cus she is awesome at transfiguration), maybe some for Crouch Jr, thinking over his role for the year at Hogwarts. Maybe even from the other school headmasters, and Albus's Pov. Just giving ideas mate. Love your chapters.

Are you back to one chapter a day again if so thank you very much Author sama

Yea I was thinking the same. I feel like the one thing this novel is missing is the lack of character interaction. Its like the MC just dose his own thing and barely interacts with the story. I mean what is the point of a fan fic if the fiction its based on is basically ignored 90% of the time and just have the MC only do things in the background. Anyway that's just my opinion. That being said I feel the author writes very well and puts together hid thoughts very well I just think the best parts of his story are when the MC interacts with others and it onky happens in small scale and not often enough.

ladies and gentleman character development at its finest.

Man, this chapter was

Awesome😏😎. I can't stop myself from smiling or could it be smirking. Hahaha...I like this Draco. Thanks for the chapter.

Hey you have some fanfic you recomend ?

Author give us the enemies to lovers harryXdraco that we deserve.

I like the mature draco. Great chapter.

Well that was interesting at the end.

exp

Quinn the dude that had a plan within a plan.

Something about magic that I want you, the author to mention or mess with, are those cursed books, such as the one that force ones to speak in poems for the rest of the life. maybe one that forces one to speak in another language, but Quinn uses it to learn some ancient language as a lifehack, or as a prank, or only mentioned in someway or another, Because when I first read HP they were the most interesting form of magic for me, of how cursed object works, but it was only mentioned briefly in the books.

*Watches the golden groups mind explode* That was great Thanks for the chapter.

I am hyped for body magic great chapter

Nicely done! Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work