Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

First meeting with Dumbledore would be like - Dumbledore : Welcome my boy, have a seat. Would you like a lemon drop? Dumbledore's real thoughts ( You are powerful my boy. Now let me see if you are evil like Tom. Legilimens. )

Most of other hp fic always have MC meeting Dumbledore in a early chapter , meanwhile yours is different

you gotta stop with cliffhangers bruh. it's always important moments that you end the chapter.

quin = absolut mad lad

Quinn could have just taken James' assurance but he has become a proper pureblood and knows how to use his standing to intimidate for good measure.

Almost every chapter..... But all of them are excellent.

Wait hold it detention for what??? Being outside the castle? Only thing they can get him on maybe

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story please keep it up and stay healthy

Fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more hijinks! Keep up the great work!

Obrigado pelo capítulo autor-san 🖤🖤🖤

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at this point, i just want george west to be my sugar daddy 😍

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter

Cliffhanger, really?

After reading until this chapter, my favorite character isn't mc. It's grandpa and alen! One is the summit of riches and one is the summit of mind arts! Mc is my third favorite

Haha that George West quote at the end XD

good chapter

very nice. cliff