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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Ziiro101
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"Expecto patronum!!!" Dumbledore said calmly,

FraulC
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Ever the businessman.. Hahaha

An_Anime_Addict
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Ah i wanted this to be a scene where Quinn would amaze the whole school by releasing his patronus and driving away all the dementers but as expected of the author, he used logic so that the professors would release their patronus instead when told and with Quinn's personality, it was quite impossible for hin to do that and stay low. Idk if i should be disappointed or not😞🤔

DronXxX18
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in last a/n i just thought if Samuel l Jackson played Dumbledore, he would have said this line after realising his patronus charm

MrMike
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Thanks for another great chapter, always puts a smile on my face! Also I wonder if Daphne will bring up he wanted to invite her to Hogsmeade now that it was said she went!

meetmonarch
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really love your story. from pace to character development to grammer. keep it up

MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

SSS_Class_Reader
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no matter what I love the ending character briefs one of the best novel ever!!!!!!

Alien_Space_Bat
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system
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Thanks for the chapter author sama 😊 please keep up the good work 😃

Jay_Singh_7861
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First comment

Arcanistis
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Michael_Scotts
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I dont understand the part about Lily and Harry. Out or nowhere the MC just smiles and gives her.a thumbs up and Lily sighs and pinches her nose. Then it talks about Harryvbeing like Sirius who was a flirt and how she feel about that from nowhere. Harry has barely existed in the story like all the others. Theres been nothing about him flirting and little interaction in general with anyone. It's out of place.

WolfLord
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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

LazyAdept
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Thanks for the chapter

Hakkira
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Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

AvidReader962
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Dhaliwal2
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I hope Dumbledore really goes and fight ministry this time. But why the dementors at school? They are hunting Petter pettigrew right? He will never dare to come to Hogwarts to harm harry with Lily and Dumbledore present. I hope you give a valid reason for this.

lee2313
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Thanks for the chap author and, more plzz

Bookcultivater
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hahaha angry Dumbledore is hilarious