Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

It would have been nice if he covered all of hogwarts in dust and asked them to clean it manually without magic

I LOVE WHAT YOU DID THIS CHAPTER Although you could’ve faked a magical contract for the two girls just to scare them but i do love classroom 773H

I think that was melodramatic. Deals with the Devil and so on. The only explanation I have is that this Seven Sins thing is affecting him. He should at least make them take a magical contract if he wants their favor so much. I thought for a second that the Pink color will affect him and there will be an R-rated chapter. Guess next time. ;)

although I want ivy to be the FMC with what happened in this chapter I already see it very difficult for that to happen ..... because even though they were "on good terms" it is a deal that is more commercial than even friends ........ Thanks for the chapter

OK the colors arc was hated by me at first cause I thought my man Quinn hated anything or anyone messing with his mind. The idea he let himself be controlled or influenced by something and doesn't notice it irked me. As he was supposed to be smarter than that. So it felt like you were dumbing him down for the plot. It still feels like he is being purposefully ignorant of the mood swings. But I am finding the overall arc interesting but I think it would have been more fun if he knew about it but couldn't figure out how and spent his time trying to Crack it. But him being oblivious to it makes me cringe a bit. If his teacher got wind of it he would definitely crucify him.

I really hope he gonna make her have hard task.

Thank you for the chap author-san. The colors add a bit of *spice* I didn't expect in the story. Hope you're doing great

Marvelous chapter👍 i hope this story will be finished, bc the descriptionnonly say that its some kind of side project to get new ideas....

OHHHH, I remember superbia from trinity seven if I’m not wrong. Wonder what they exactly do in regards to the 7 sins. Really interested in how things turn out

This is a great chapter for me

love the chapter, i would love some spanks but was ok xddd just kidding

first

Haha I knew it was the seven deadly sins.

A bit disappointed that Ivy is this dumb

pov when you recognize the color as the seven deadly sins

thank you for the great chapter

Why does he want Mauraders map when he has better map?

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the awesome chapter