Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

As long as he doesn't do anything stupid then I'm completely fine with how this arc is going

I think the 7 sins part was cool. Throughout the story so far Quin has developed power, intelligence, perspective, and the importance of being low key. Now he needed to start coming out of his shell and begin to bloom into the competent extraordinary wizard he is. Hogwarts has a room of accolades of those who could of changed the world, even when young and subtlety helped them grow, and even fewer were ever mentioned about the vaults. Now Hogwarts has deemed him worthy to try and explore the most dangerous, mysterious, and elusive trials that Hogwarts has to give, all in order to educate and pass down knowledge that would otherwise been lost to the times, too dangerous to be released into the world, but potentially to the worlds benefits. Hogwarts took a whole year to evaluate the students and then slowly reveals and aids them in the pursuit of knowledge. As the castle starts to show its secrets, the vaults also show the castle much more about the students. As the author said before, the icy vaults showed his perseverance and aptitude to adapt and learn, judging his ability and probability to survive the other vaults. The second Vault, you, the author calls the sins/color vault, where I call it the Vault of Revealing. This vault bypasses his Occlumency, by not attacking but enhancing what is already their, revealing to himself his faults, but more importantly it helps him reveal his good points too. The theme of this volume should be about finding balance as Quin works too hard for his physical age (1 Sloth can help him rest). He is too low key (2 Pride will help reveal his talents). He doesn't truly know what he wants (3 Envy will help). If he doesn't really understand how to get what he wants (4 Greed will guide his interest and instinct). So far he hasn't really made any friends (5 Lust will help direct his attraction to others). so far he doesn't really have any enemies (6 Anger/wrath will help identifying who he really doesn't like). He often loses himself into his research and at times takes unnecessary risks (7 Gluttony will help point this out). His faults help identify who he is as a person, the 7 Deadly Sins identify his selfish desires. Once Quin realizes that it is not his mind but his emotions and desires amplified, he will then have to temper himself to conquer his desires with the 7 great virtues. Each of these can be overcome with the seven corresponding virtues of (1) humility, (2) charity, (3) chastity, (4) gratitude, (5) temperance, (6) patience, and (7) diligence. Once he does this, He will be a master of both himself as well as be able to identify if and when he will be under any influence, at the same time he will have a great understanding and measure of himself. This whole volume will concentrate on character development as a human. Good job Author! I look forward to more of your Fanfic.

I kind of want to see if Ivy is going to blame Quinn if he acts more suspicious.

why doesnt quinn set up a ward around the bathroom if he knows where the entrance is I wonder if any of the golden duo and the 2 girls (are they a golden quad rn?) will go and ask quinn for help

... I seriously do wonder what this 'Climax' will be... Sigh...

I don't pretty much like the COLOR ARC, but I appreciate that you take criticism well. Nevertheless, I'll try to read it so I can understand the plot after this arc ends.

I haven't problem at all with the "Colors Arc" and For me, it is very interesting Arc. Just continue what you have been doing👍. Keep Fighting✊✊✊

Didn’t and don’t have a problem with how the story was going, I thought that everybody was a little overreacting about the colors. I trust that Author knows what he/she is doing and Quinn being controlled only makes him seem less perfect = human. Quinn is going to be fine and learn from it

Thanks for clarifying things in the beginning and thanks for the chapter 🤗

Thx for the chapter. I don't understand people getting involved in other people's stories. If you don't like it, dont read or go write yours.

Hey author, just wanted to let you know some thing. You don't have to justify or apologise for anything in your story, it's YOUR story. Anyone who enjoys it (like I do) is wellcome, and anyone who doesn't can leave ant any time, no hard feelings. I liked the colors idea and I'm going to keep enjoying this arc, but if people really hate it when they can leave but you don't have to explain or justify anything to them. I'm hungry for the resto of the story 😁

Not that my comment matters but like, I like this development, he can't always get everything good. This can be considered as character development. He needs to experience difficulty but I do get why the readers are kinda mad, its because when we read fanfiction, we put ourselves in place of mcs so we do dislike hardship but its your fanfiction and you do what's best for it

Dude your ideas and story devolepment is good and not cliche like other stories. Your storys balance is very good keep up the good work. Your ideas so interesting ı’m looking forward to other years. 👍👍🥇🥇⭐️⭐️👑👑

Thanks for explaining stuff. I hope in the end the arc turn outs good.

Glad you explained the colors ark, so I am curious to see the end result, thanks for the chapter

I like the color arc, you should do your thing and disregard the people bashing your story. They are story destroyers and should write their own story instead of trying to force to change yours

my only problem with the colors arc is that he isn't aware at all of his emotional changes or curious about the vault that clearly did something to him

First reader

Man I love this story