Comments of chapter undefined of ARISTIA

ARISTIA

Whannmarie

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The_Mad_TitanLv11The_Mad_Titan

Your first story? doesn't look like it, i enjoyed the chapter. I love how you did a pov for each character but i feel maybe you could space it a little. other than that its really fine

3yr

WhannmarieAuthorWhannmarie

This seriously is my first story. I had written before but never a serious story. Thank you and I will space it

3yr

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CodeyVanillaLv10CodeyVanilla

Interesting. I’m so loving this😊😊

3yr

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Whannmarie

mozza_melloLv3mozza_mello

aye i enjoyed this :3

3yr

Septic_RedLv3Septic_Red

This seems a promising beginning

3yr