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Comments of chapter undefined of Douluo Dalu : Journey To The End

GamersUnite_7321
GamersUnite_7321Lv2GamersUnite_7321

Writing quality is passable but the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing. 6mth

GamersUnite_7321
GamersUnite_7321Lv2GamersUnite_7321

Writing quality is passable but the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing. 6mth

Min_May_Loe
Min_May_LoeLv13Min_May_Loe

Bro you literally copied the first two chapters of exploding attribute system (except the system part) and made it as your first chapter. Isn't that too much?

NeoBee
NeoBeeLv6NeoBee

The synopsis says "No OP System to help nor Powerful family or Rich beautiful fiance to help" But he will got help from the original MC Tang San by licking his ass, become his nanny and a complete side character Author, you better not going in that direction

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Avenging
AvengingLv3Avenging

This has to be one of the most used cliche starts

RavenClock
RavenClockLv4RavenClock

Ok I already have a problem with the synopsis No op anything? I mean even the original Mc have some cheat and op bull .

ManGanu
ManGanuLv5ManGanu

Nice but need chapter before MC arrived at village 😃

God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3God_Of_Laziness

Thanks for the amazing chapters!