Bed_of_roses
Wow I’m So sorry that any young girl/boy should go through this. I wished parents paid more attention to their kids , how do you give birth to kids and ignore what you know are signs of abuse? Confusion yes many a times why would clements lead her on that’s almost as bad as the abuse. Meredith her friend knowing all her story get drunk at a party and claim she’d watch over her and not let anything or anyone harm her as well as clements who takes off with his friends leaving her with a drunk. they more than anyone knew of her lack of socializing and left her to get into the predicament she was forced to live that night. Even her boss Tucker shoud have helped her. all this ignorence makes me sick this is the reason many have committed suicide. You did show all the mistakes many do in real life. Hard to accept. Did you do a sequel?
For me it seems that you just get bored of this work. So... It was great until the last chapter. You could make Clement to take a revenge on Hunter. You could make Hunter cry for loosing his son, when someone would show him pho of his little coppy. You could make Iris to meet Hunter one more time and make him regret things he did. And after all - he is father, why not making him fall in love with his baby girl so much to aski Iris for forgiveness and to let him stay close to baby and eventually fell in love with Iris. Like the story was juicy, but without the ending. And I hate that Clements feelings was not true. And I hate that he pretended that he doesn't know why Iris was thinking that he will hit her. And I hate the fact that the nice Clement is relative to evil Hunter. Not nice. Not at all.