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Comments of chapter undefined of My Demon

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My Demon

GwenCreepy

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Robin_Morgan_0032
Robin_Morgan_0032Lv5Robin_Morgan_0032

Totally confused in this chapter especially.....I get why you like being descriptive but I got lost in who's who in this chapter after you added many more characters. People are given names for a reason use them.

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GwenCreepy
GwenCreepyLv3GwenCreepy

After describing the characters, I use their names more to create a better reading even so, I only added here 2 or 3 characters, and sorry if it's confuse for u. But in the future it will become better[img=recommend]

2yr
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