Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

I thought the last few chapters were fine as setups for the next arc + foundation of world background.

nice chapter

your doing fine , just don't rush just keep it simple 👌

Thanks💙👍

i want to eat magical steel

Thanks for the Chapter

Lord Kubera really is a guiding light, helping those in need press F

A suggestion from me, why don't you make the MC go and travel outside his sect, meet more interesting people and possibly unravel his pasts or something? You know, more world building stuff that leads to MC identity and the people around him... Also it would be a good direction if there are some 'rivals' he could meet along the way, for him or for his disciples, to spice things up....Anyways thanks Author-sama for the chapter!

There should be balance between action and relax chapters, The few last chapters were used on too much on slow life that there is no tension at all. Too much tension/action scenes will bring alot of stress to even the readers because of the constant fights resulting in taking a break from reading. Too little tension will instead make readers bored and taking a break from reading or even outright abandon it! Although world building is important, not all readers like the excessive paragprahs of world building. More importantly, i think you need to start address the war between the 2 kingdoms(which i think you are doing it now) You probably feel tired writing because you're running out of momentum in thinking of how the war, demonic sect will be solved and the next plot after it. You have the general outline, but executing is harder so you feel stressed

Your doing great and the story in the last few chapter was interesting in my opinion so don't worry too much about it and once again thanks for the story

Thanks for the chapter!

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Thanks for the chapter 🦫

Another tip, try reading bad cultivation novels, it will help you not commit in your story.