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Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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_Readian_
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thanks for the chapter

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Kubera
KuberaLv6Kubera

Intresting, considering (Chinese) authors usually use the main quest to make their MC ridiculously strong by the end of first arc. Love the change of pace.

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Laxdad
LaxdadLv10Laxdad

hmmm. that ash sunstone will probably be very useful to Qing Yi once she gets to the nascent soul, or domain lord realm.

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JoJo_Soni
JoJo_SoniLv4JoJo_Soni

so mc is not perfect. or will he become perfect later with the help of the system.

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boom_boom_8806
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sokk
sokkLv3sokk

Thanks for the chapter :3

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HeavenlyChuni
HeavenlyChuniLv2HeavenlyChuni

It seems like the system dont have a free system inventory for mc. Well i still hoping the system will produce inventory for him coz the rewards of system is too great for someone like him with no sufficient strength to protect it.

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Tyller_Yang
Tyller_YangLv3Tyller_Yang

Of course, this lazy bum didn't even bother to study something so useful.

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Cynicals
CynicalsLv14Cynicals

while I like the idea of him being bad at formations, they way it's portrayed is not the best. it would be far more impactful and smooth to go in depth in how he's making them as he makes it, and then having it collapse at the end, without telling the reader about how bad he is outright. not only does this immerse the reader more but it also cuts out the repetition that is present in the current draft.

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lelisPw
lelisPwLv4lelisPw

I'm liking this book more and more ... Obrigado pelo capítulo...

Endo_2014
Endo_2014Lv2Endo_2014

No system inventory or item identification options just ruined half the system use

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Godhaxz
GodhaxzLv3Godhaxz

The reward kinda sucks cause it can't be used right away

John_Esquerra_1643
John_Esquerra_1643Lv1John_Esquerra_1643

well the items not having any information kind of disappoints me

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Ethan132
Ethan132Lv14Ethan132

Ty :)

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EnablingBarley
EnablingBarleyLv13EnablingBarley

Thanks for the Chapter :)

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Ace2hunter
Ace2hunterLv14Ace2hunter

thanks for the chapter

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Kyle_Tov
Kyle_TovLv3Kyle_Tov

So is cultivation up reward from System rare

Sidis
SidisLv15Sidis

nice chapter

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Artist1905
Artist1905Lv13Artist1905

oh that's funny hahaha

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ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

At least some decent comedy like this formation thing, but it still can be refined to be better like other guy point out.----------------------- p/s: If you need more idea for more advanced formations thing, you should check that novel about certain 'steady' mc, since he give some really good concept idea there, for example 'chain formations' which basically normal formations that connect to each other, and that end up created a more indirect advanced formation there (then there are 3D space so you don't have to only draw formations on flat surface ?, not sure if I remember right)

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ali_seifi
ali_seifiLv4ali_seifi

Bye ~~