Gaburieru
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definitely a unique first chapter ...
I love the lines, it's sounded so sophisticated and edwardian.
Wow!! So well scripted, and some really thoughtful dialogue!
yooo this first chap is good :D
Nice start... I'm loving this already, if only the rest of the chapters are free. But alas, they are not... *Sad Weeb Noises*
First chapter is pretty good ngl
thanks
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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