AaronTaichou
face an advice, there are a million fanfics that go for the easy cimnho (what you are doing) (aaah to develop persanagem or more developed thoughts is very difficult ... I will use the cliche). you are making a demented sasuke, a sakura, so fanatic ... what I'm trying to say is, bro I've already read this kind of storyline 1000 times changes a little bit,