Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto Senju: A Forested Maelstrom

face an advice, there are a million fanfics that go for the easy cimnho (what you are doing) (aaah to develop persanagem or more developed thoughts is very difficult ... I will use the cliche). you are making a demented sasuke, a sakura, so fanatic ... what I'm trying to say is, bro I've already read this kind of storyline 1000 times changes a little bit,

How could he be so strong, I'm a Saiyan elite, I cant be defeated by a low class wretch...wait a minute

thanks for the chapter, very good But can you reduce Sasuke's words which are part of "I'm the elite" or "that loser", i m very happy of you do that

good chapter, maybe, just maybe you can roll the story for the senju clan and how they where hunted and so, would be cool to see how your imagination runs. but I like your chapters, good work

Thanks for the chaps great chap

Please don't drop this

Plaase author-san update tis story !!!!!

When will the next chapter be?

Thanks for chapter

I like this story plot. Keep them chapters coming.

Update more

Really nice we wana more

Thanks for the chapter!!

whats ur release schedule

thanks for the chapter author and more pls

Thank you for the chapter

hey when are the new episodes coming[img=update][img=update]

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I know that you are going to make him love in but will you make her stronger and will he be close to haku?