Comments of chapter undefined of Mystic Age

Just read the first chapter I like the background it's different. A good difference though keep it up!!

I liked the connection how the powers came to be, but unfortunately for me I'm very inquisitive... How humanity could manipulate space, travel through solar systems, terraform planets but don't manipulate their bodies, gravity or other forces at will? I mean if the technology from back then was so advanced why they need to manually exercise or learn in old-fashioned way, just would love to read an explanation in world building later on 👌

so no relationships?

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good start, but please don't spoil the flow by making him a superhero no more knight in shining armor

need more

Thanks for the chap