Comments of chapter undefined of The Untouchable Son-In-Law: The Master Peregrine

Too many things were skipped. It was a great book up till the last few chapters. What a crime against humanity. There’ absolutely no closure on anything and the ending was rushed.

Is this over… What is going on…. None of this makes any sense for how the story has been going?

We didn’t See how the battle went what about the battle between his granaps and Maximas? Hilary Stone? There is so much more.

This is the second time a book I’ve read has ended abruptly without any closure and no real ending. We should get a refund for wasting our time and money on books like this.

Wow… what a disa ppointment

There’s so much left yet it looks like the end, what’s going on?

Is this the end of the story??

The End??? There’s too many things left unanswered. I can’t believe it’s ending like this.

Please don't end it here and don't do thing where his brother pretends to be him again that is so cliché. There's too many loose ends to end it here

So wha about the Melany and the brother

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There is lot my Chapter's missing in between and no continuity between chapter 429 & 430

When we going to get more chapters?

😔 needs More chapters ??????????

Haha wonder if it is really Finn or Donovan

to the author please don't ever write again in your life this is a disappointment . you made so many problems with no solution

this is the second story I read and it ended just like this no real understanding of the outcome. This reading App is a scam. I'm uninstalying

The most disappointing bil I’ve ever read. I want my money back😡😡😡😡💩💩💩💩💩🤮🤮🤮🤮l

Anybody has a petition for a refund? What a scam and IM pretty sure that’s Donovan back🤮🤮🤮, please refund this was a complete scam💩💩💩