Comments of chapter undefined of The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray

Agree book dragged out… however was a great read!! It left a lot of unanswered questions… 1. Who was the man in white who saved Jace? And why? 2. Who was/is Lucas real dad? 3. Moms secret? 4. What happened to the Peerless Martial? 5. Who is that girl Lucas met on the Train? What is her relevance in this Story? 6. What happened to the girl Lucas saved from the Peerless Martial? 7. So what really happened the night Cheyennes bff took Lucas to the hotel room? 8. Did Cheyenne ever make up with her Mom? 9. Did all rhe Helsmen of the 8 top familie survive? So many unanswered questions?

I can't believe after starting this thing almost 2 years ago you finally ended it. But you are true to form, you introduced new characters and left a lot of unanswered questions that you opened up and never finished.

What do you mean the end?

This is what they call scum theft crooks shame on web novel I will advi people not to fall for dirty scums an I will post it on Facebook instagram youtube

That’s it??? I exspected more.

The end? 😳😳😳

Nice book!!! But why so soon end?😢

The End?! So ma unanswered questions What about Star City? Did Florence and Cheyenne work everything out? What happened to Cheyenne’s dad ? What happened to Cheyenne’s sister? Did Jordan and Maddy finally get married? That’s just a few unanswered questions

I’m just glad we didn’t lose too many chapters this month. Was a great book besides the ending. Thank you

I read these 4Xs now but the ending is too short and has lots of mystery that hasn't been solved yet...

See this! I just gifted the story: 10 COINS

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the author has no brain anymore by cutting the story in a very questionable and uninteresting ending,,

6. Skylar is her name she was too weak like wade so in seclusion to power up (wishful thinking of me). 7. maybe nothing because her family and her would be wipe out but I don't know cause it's not the same situation between them than Cheyenne and Lucas in the start. 8&9. Maddy save their situation and she call her mom even if it's not in front of her.

Well, even is too short the "Happy ENDING" of Lucas family, I'm happy for both that at least NO one will cause problems for their married as a "Husband and Wife" but I was hoping for a new version of Lucas's baby JR.❤❤❤

Every time I just post a comment I told the author to END the story quickly and don't make it too long like just the 2 original stories almost going 7K chapters but my surprise WOW😮WOW...Why did the author just END quick Lucas's story with too many unquestioned??? How about the projects to build the "Star City" the biggest company???

How I wished you updated to tell us on the Hutton's more, about the Families' helsmen first please

some parts of the book were good, too bad the author/copy and paste artist decided to rush the ending instead of posting the rest of the book.

Great book. Just wish there was a heads up that there were only 2 chapters left before I purchased privilege for this month. Especially since the month before there were many days of nothing being released like normal. I had hoped at first, yesterday, when I saw the chapter count down to another chapter coming, that maybe you’d continue the book, with a future storyline or something like that.

Like ever author who writes books. It’s hard to rehash plot twists. Who knows it this author is well deserve break from ebook. They losing inspiration to continue. Please be mindful. It’s hard work to connect all the reasons or backgrounds of everyone mentioned within this ebook. I applaud the read of this book and hope and wish that this author has continued writing. Maybe, just me wishing for a book two this storyline. But thank you for entertaining me. Mahalo from Hawaii, Nani808Girl