Comments of chapter undefined of The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray

This chapter is Repeated story is getting bored🤮🤮🤮🤮

This is unacceptable why am I paying when the author is not doing his job. One

Why do we care about hearsay? Why are People’s “thoughts” “gossip” added here so much so, that it takes up most of the page. I say page because this is by no means a chapter!!

This book has reached the pinnacle of BS per the BS detector….

none of this makes since Giselle knows Lucas has power because she was at the auction and Ethan isnt so much of an idiot that he wouldnt tell his underlings to be respectful to Lucas. so the last couple chapters make no since.

The author didnt release 2 chapters since he didnt meet his deadline last night and this morning, he should have released the other 2 chapters as well since we have paid for the adVanced chapters

Okay this page (because it definitely can't be considered a chapter) Is nothing but a bunch of put together B.S. unnecessary and trivial internal dialogue of trivial characters just put in for effect.

I’m just waiting for something unexpected to happen and getting fluff and the same old same over and over

Repetition is becoming too many, the story is getting dull and boring.

Agreed, the same plot throughout . someone supposedly powerful offends lucas and he deals with them.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza