Comments of chapter undefined of The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray

Okay, this is really irritating there was absolutely nothing to this. How could you possibly even call this a chapter? If nothing else it could be called a paragraph for how short it was.

Did Damon already forget what happened at the Lion Club?? How can one be so smart in business and so stupid and self righteous in life

Everyone in the story seems to have amnesia and author keeps on repeating to remind them things from past.

Stop treating these little tidbits as chapters. A chapter is supposed to be comprised of related scenes that are all working together to make a similar point. What you are doI get is more like using a paragraph as a chapter. This is annoying and a rip-off

Why Even trying To attack Lucas

pages are getting shorter and shorter. grrrrrr

the story now starting get me bored😅

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon