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Comments of chapter undefined of The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray

Barbara_Camp
Barbara_CampLv3Barbara_Camp

THe chapter was short and full of Fluff. can we get longer chapters and more than one chapter to read at a time please. I hope this doesn’t drag on cause I’m sick of Lena and Tristen

Troy_Pannell
Troy_PannellLv14Troy_Pannell

Did you really have to freeze time and include a bunch of descriptive and unnecessary commentary of people talking about what could happen because Lucas didn't dodge. They all were able to carry on a conversation about him being hit while Max was already swinging. That was pitiful, adding that bit of fluff nonsense in a failed attempt to make a once again Short chapter appear longer.

Mar_Terpano
Mar_TerpanoLv2Mar_Terpano

i really hate the character of lena. .

Dao_SclSrvc123456
Dao_SclSrvc123456Lv4Dao_SclSrvc123456

Hi Fluffy! I hope you’re doing Good as you’re included each chapter now!

DaoistKeZNaU
DaoistKeZNaULv4DaoistKeZNaU

chapters are to short, phrase repeated , please let us read and stop dragging this out.

Mary_Jennifer_Tye
Mary_Jennifer_TyeLv14Mary_Jennifer_Tye

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DaoistV9rX9j
DaoistV9rX9jLv1DaoistV9rX9j

Good content

Marlon_Gerardo
Marlon_GerardoLv4Marlon_Gerardo

yeh! go lucas

Margaritas680
Margaritas680Lv14Margaritas680

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