Comments of chapter undefined of The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray

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Grrrrr short chapters!! I am more than three months into this book and the chapters and daily releases are just getting shorter

Okay, you integrated these new characters into the story by connecting them with Sam and Robert but this chapter was way too short and could have had more meat to it.

More Chapters, Longer Chapters, More substance or meat to these short chapters.

How many times do ou have to repeat yourself To eXtend a chapter, this is rediculous!!!!!!!!

read more please

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule