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Comments of chapter undefined of The Abandoned Husband Dominates

Matthew_Drew_2081
Matthew_Drew_2081Lv14Matthew_Drew_2081

Good book!!

StyleStar_777
StyleStar_777Lv13StyleStar_777

Feels like an incomplete novel. Ending part was rushed. There is so much story could have added like Jordan's glory in the Celestial King Planet but the Author ended it abruptly. It would be better if the Author decide to Write a Second Part.

Fakoya_Emmanuel
Fakoya_EmmanuelLv4Fakoya_Emmanuel

The end!? what do you mean the end!? so bland!!

niel_ramos
niel_ramosLv13niel_ramos

incomplete ending

SJD_R
SJD_RLv3SJD_R

end? its incomplete end

Rohith_Sri
Rohith_SriLv3Rohith_Sri

what about Lota? she was madly in love with Jordan...!

Fritz_Rigniz
Fritz_RignizLv4Fritz_Rigniz

this is the end ??

duminduud
duminduudLv13duminduud

hope 2nd series comes but has only 1 yet in original chinese stoey roo

Fernando_Patino
Fernando_PatinoLv13Fernando_Patino

Writer has skills def ended it early must have personal reasons but hope fully a part 2 in the future

dragonext
dragonextLv12dragonext

well the ending sucked, feels too rushed. also how is it now 2035 and they all knew they would return...for that matter how is Oldman Martin still alive? this story wasn't that bad in the beginning then it took a wild turn towards the crazy and went even father from sane. even with the wild and extreme path the story took the ending was a huge let down.

James_Warren_3783
James_Warren_3783Lv14James_Warren_3783

thats it just stopped completely. I need more. 2nd book please.

Aprock410
Aprock410Lv13Aprock410

Seriously? This is the last page?

StyleStar_777
StyleStar_777Lv13StyleStar_777

Nice book. Completed recently. It will be good if a second part will come. Kudos to the writer.

shah_reddy
shah_reddyLv14shah_reddy

The woman in her thirties is Hailey Camden and the little boy is Jordan son

Aaron_Beggs
Aaron_BeggsLv13Aaron_Beggs

Who were the people in their thirties?

Luohuo
LuohuoLv14Luohuo

one of the most lame garbo ending for a novel like this. he neither is the strongest nor he ever dealt with Victoria. heck he even is together with his cheating who*e of the ex wife. he never confronted lav. and what happened to all the other girls who Mc simped for.

DaoistXnd83r
DaoistXnd83rLv3DaoistXnd83r

How about the others? Like jemie and dragon?

DaoistXnd83r
DaoistXnd83rLv3DaoistXnd83r

I hope there’s a book 2… i really like your story… 🥰

dragonext
dragonextLv12dragonext

I read this a yr ago and left webnovel after as it was the only reason why i joined. I was emailed that there was a update. Funny how it says the end but now after it says "to be continued ". A bit late to be adding to something you already ended. Shouldn't have rushed it in the first place. Just write the story as it comes to you, if you get stuck or blocked take a break and try later. We will wait but if you say "THE End" you can't come back years later and say syke.

112200123
112200123Lv2112200123

who is the little boy beside her is it the son of jordan and lauren..? can't understand this ending ....

Safiroth
SafirothLv4Safiroth

What a bland ending. Jordan should have punished Levana for murdering his child by destroying her womb. Victoria is still unpunished for her crimes.