Comments of chapter undefined of The Human in DxD
The Human in DxD
Starmegalo
Chapter comments10
I am sorry but this is way complicated then it should be, actually it's not complicated but that it's hard to understand wih the Grammer and the structure of the words, honestly I usually like big chapters but I do not enjoy this, I know you wanted to expand the world and make it more intriguing but honestly I don't see myself caring for this, you could have chosen another way for expanding the universe instead of this, the only thing I feel when reading this is confusion, I know you must have put a lot of effort in this but I seriously can't see my self reading this, I want to like it but I just can't. Though I hope you continue improving yourself
Well... Thanks, I'll always improve myself and while this first chapters are a bit too... You know it but in future there will be only action and also other character POV's so I will try to make more simple. And you might want to skip that part in future if you ever try to read it again... Thanks for your honest comment.
Guys, story's with long chapters doesn't show up to much here so please add to your collection and vote me! I also know this chapter a bit worse that is because the one I fixed things got erased and I already post this one in FFN so please don't mind for this time. Smut will be in story but not with every girl and that means *** = love not gonna happen because this is more logical type of story that actually for people likes to use their brain while reading (no offence, but every character 1 dimensional and some of them beyond saving even with writing them as OOC and people loves them as favorite waifu this means......... I leave it to you that part.) Whatever PLEASE SUPPORT THE STORY AND I WİLL WRİTE MORE!
