Comments of chapter undefined of The Human in DxD

holy shit this is huge

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honestly there are too many confusing situations, in many speeches I don't understand who's talking or who the POV is ... Furthermore, his situation is also very confused, we move on to when he is born with his parents who say that they will never abandon him to the fact that he lives alone and is an orphan ...

good chapter the quality improved compared to the other I have a suggestion you should put the name of the character when he speaks so not to confuse who is speaking like this: Rio- luke: isabella = one of these so as not to get confused I hope you consider my suggestion good chapter

ngl I'm lost.

thanks for the chap 👌 hope to see more[img=recommend]

Demasiado texto para mi quiero algo más sencillo si que adiós suerte con la novela