Tento
Did you just... delete your chapter attempting to explain yourself when you were being called out on the story being unrealistic for the world it is set in...
Bruh! I don’t want to spoil the thing that is why I’m so vague at explaining it. I’m already advanced In chapters and I already explained it in there. currently I’m writing him training and deciding What technique he wants.... I can’t just say that this happen and that happen, right?
Kurogano:Doubt the last little tidbit can be explained away in any way but the entire system is corrupt and a majority of people are villians but I'll give you a shot.
I mean, I get that the police is corrupt, but there is now way they can just take an entire orphanage in this day and age and no one questions it. How deep do you think police corruption runs, because your obviously overestimateing this. One guy falsely procecuted and then killed in custody, shady and unrealistic. Kidnapping an entire orphanage with every single child and caretaker vanishing moments after the police showed up with a whole squad and without permission, come on now that's just bullshit, essentially in a 'Hero' society, where everything and everyone has a camera
still no clue if this is a villain dominated society or hero one, just specify this in the prologue, many inconsistencies would be removed if you do that. cause if its a hero one, a policeman acting like this is the first thing that gets caught, and taking in consideration that their chief is so paranoid that he even doubts his shadow, policeman like this will be caught even more so when you have 'that guy' with heroic personality hoping to help society at every corner. and police even getting chance against a villain is unrealistic as well because it's a villain we are talking about, heroes look for a chance to fight villains, and no way hero association is gonna skip where a villain lived and a whole orphanage full of children disappeared right after police arrived. taking that heroes are present at every corner, even if you want, you can't go unnoticed. this whole Idea would be unrealistic if it was a Hero society instead of a villain dominated one.