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I mean, I get that the police is corrupt, but there is now way they can just take an entire orphanage in this day and age and no one questions it. How deep do you think police corruption runs, because your obviously overestimateing this. One guy falsely procecuted and then killed in custody, shady and unrealistic. Kidnapping an entire orphanage with every single child and caretaker vanishing moments after the police showed up with a whole squad and without permission, come on now that's just bullshit, essentially in a 'Hero' society, where everything and everyone has a camera
How is there gonna be a camera when the orphanage is in the middle of nowhere....if you want like so realistic shit, then read a drama or romance one. this is a world of superpowers, there is so many possibilities that they can do to get away with this. Also the hero association Might have a corrupt person that is pretty high up in positions. there is so many things and you question how unrealistic it is....we are only in chapter 13. You’re so annoying, like do you want an explanation on 1 fucking chapter? That is why this is a novel there is still Things that is questionaBle from the start, isnt that how stories work? This is only the tip of the iceberg and you are already complaining....
still no clue if this is a villain dominated society or hero one, just specify this in the prologue, many inconsistencies would be removed if you do that. cause if its a hero one, a policeman acting like this is the first thing that gets caught, and taking in consideration that their chief is so paranoid that he even doubts his shadow, policeman like this will be caught even more so when you have 'that guy' with heroic personality hoping to help society at every corner. and police even getting chance against a villain is unrealistic as well because it's a villain we are talking about, heroes look for a chance to fight villains, and no way hero association is gonna skip where a villain lived and a whole orphanage full of children disappeared right after police arrived. taking that heroes are present at every corner, even if you want, you can't go unnoticed. this whole Idea would be unrealistic if it was a Hero society instead of a villain dominated one.