Cher_Yan
I honestly like the first chapter! It was a bit confusing at first who was talking but then realized at the end that there was actually a third person aside from Sunny and Selena. Although, the entire scene in the first chapter reminded me of 13 Reasons Why. A great start indeed. I will be reading this from time to time. Oh and I like how you write in metaphors. There are lots of descriptive texts to describe the scene. It would be also nice if you add more sensual feelings too. Hehe! Alas, great job!